Mater Dolorosa

(A story in six lines – six words each.)

Her funeral was fairly well attended.

My friend took some things away.

Holy cards and a glass juicer.

The father said, “We failed you.”

Then he said, “I’m so sorry.”

That was all that was left.

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  1. William Gibson Avatar

    So powerful, congratulations on the short form!

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  2. elizabethlevett Avatar

    Thank you so much! Means a lot.

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  3. Marcos Fernandes Avatar

    awesome.

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